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Hahahaha

Nice use of samples at 1:18. Yeah this song was quite funny. So was the first one. So yes. I liked your beats.

Very nice work.

This is a very well made song here. The progression is nice and fluid and the song structure really shows you worked hard to get this to flow nicely. The melody line is so soothing. The chord progressions itself is gorgeous, with a nice, subtle saw sequence in the background, but the piano really tied it all together; the cherry on top if you will. There's so much going on with this song. It's... brilliant.

el oh el.

It was funny. It wasn't very good from a technical standpoint, but it was pretty funny. So I'm not gonna take it too seriously.

It sounds nice but

It's just a bunch of preset sequences and such. It's not bad to use them, just try and use them in a manner that doesn't make it sound so amateur. You could build a real melody on top of this. Just turn the sequences down a notch or two and create something. It's a good start nonetheless, it just needs more of yourself in it and a little less Fruity Loops' stuff if you know what I mean.

heretic49 responds:

theres lyrics coming ot htis when the lady records them andsuch its just the start for my corprate monkey industrial piece with three of us all chipping in an such jus hungover playing an stuff so yeh

My God man....

That was gorgeous. Wow... just. Wow...

I like what you did

First off, I love that song. As far as the instrumentation goes and the chord progressions, you nailed it. I love the way it started. Sweeping chords and that panflute, brilliant. Now as for the drums, I think they could have been a little more subdued given this song is meant to be pretty laid back. It just kinda came on too strong when the beat dropped. This doesn't mean it's a bad thing what you've done here, This is just my personal opinion. It's your remix, which you've a darn good job. Something I've come to expect from you. Can't wait to here more.

nubbinownz responds:

Thanks for the review my man, Haven't heard from you in a while actually :D Good to know you're still around.
As far as the remake goes, it was really just a fun side project, nothing too serious. :) but I really do appreciate the feedback man

???

Ok, first of all, your author comments section does not leave a good first impression of you as an artist. You should probably simply say you're still improving and any criticism would be appreciated instead of completely bashing any reviewer before they even hear the song. Now to the music:
You've got some work to do. Melodically, well, there was no real discernible melody or harmony. It really sounded like you just kinda plinked some notes in a sequence and called a song (which technically could work if there was some structure to it). Secondly, what's with the sudden pause in the middle of the track? Then that third synth just pops out of nowhere and then the song returns to the previous theme. Really, this could work if you just put some more work into it. Add some effects, some more parts, and structure. This song, as it is right now, is soulless. Ok, now for the not so mean part: The best advice I can give is don't give up. Listen to all kinds of music to help you with ideas and maybe inspire you, and lastly, don't be offended by objective criticism. If the person criticizing you means well, you should take the advice into consideration rather than flaming them for not liking your music. Hope this helps, and good luck.

ILIKEVIDEOGAMES responds:

see i left comments like that for like all my other songs but i got sorta bored with it and decided to make something more interesting,
and thanks for the other stuff too, this is the longest reveiw iv got, and i appreciat that and a 4 isnt to bad, right?
i was complaining about the zeros bc i dont really think anthing that involved effort deserves a zero, a stolen copyrighted song deserves a zero, not just any crappy song, i think more people should round it up to one

Hellz Yeah!

I love it! You guy have got some serious chops. This is the kind of stuff I love to hear. True originality and musicianship on Newgrounds. I would love to do this sort of thing one day. This song is very inspiring. I'd give you an 11/10 if that was allowed.

sorohanro responds:

thanx for the nice words
"I'd give you an 11/10 if that was allowed." - well, that's easy, you give me now 10* and tomorror you'll give me 1* :)))
if you like this combination betwen jazz, funk and Balkan music, i have some more stuff here ;)

Wow this is good

I don't have too much to say about this one. Nice instrumentation, nice energy, nice mastering. This is a great song. Nothing else to say about it.

Good

But nothing really spectacular. It's just kind of typical sounding. Not bad, just not that interesting. The instruments blended well, so the mastering was pretty good. It all came together nicely in the end. So overall, good job.

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